EXT. UNDER THE TRAIN TRESTLE - NIGHT.
PETER open's his eyes, it is dark. Scared, he immediately
gets up and runs.
INT. CARNEY LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
PETER opens the screen door and walks into the living room.
MILDRED is all the way in the bag (drunk) smoking a
cigarette.
PETER STANDING IN FRONT OF THE COFFEE TABLE
Peter does not look at his mother.
MILDRED CARNEY
Where have you been?
PETER
I ran away.
MILDRED CARNEY
Yeah.... We figured that.... We saw
your window open.
MILDRED CARNEY (CONT'D)
If I were you, I'd go back to where
ever you came from.... Cause, your
dad and Mr. Charty are out looking
for you... And when they find
you... Ohhh you're gonna get it.
PETER turns and runs out the screen door.
CARNEY FAMILY HOUSE FRONT PORCH.
PETER reaches the last step when two Cadilacs pull up in
front of the house. Gene in his and MR. Charty in the other.
GENE AND MR. CHARTY jump out of their cars.
PETER turns and runs back up the steps.
GENE CARNEY
Hey, Hey, Hey... You... Wait right
there.
Peter darts into the house.
INSIDE THE HOUSE, LIVING ROOM
PETER hide in the closet under the stairs.
INSIDE THE CLOSET
Various clothes hang and other closet items on the floor.
PETER scoots his way back deep into the recesses.
GENE ENTERS THE HOUSE WITH MR CHARTY.
CARNEY HOUSE LIVING ROOM
MILDRED motions to the closet.
GENE opens the closet door and grabs at Peter unsuccessfully.
Gene is too big and Peter is too deep into the angular under
stairway closet.
GENE CARNEY (CONT'D)
Get out here.
GENE swats at Peter.
GENE CARNEY (CONT'D)
Get out here now...
GENE stops grouping.
GENE CARNEY (CONT'D)
... Do you have any idea of how we
have worried. Mr. Charty and I
have been everywhere looking for
you.
GENE gets down on his knees and looks Peter in the eyes.
GENE CARNEY (CONT'D)
Now "P"... Come out now.
PETER starts out of the closet.
GENE grabs him by the arm and pulls him the rest of the way.
GENE CARNEY (CONT'D)
Oh my son.... What were you
thinking?
Mr. Charty looks at barely coherent Mildred swaying on the
couch.
MR. CHARTY
Peter, I will personally kick your
butt if you ever scare us like that
again. Your father has given me
permission. You're not allowed to
run away young man.
MILDRED CARNEY (THROUGH HER
CIGARETTE),
(Slurring her words), You should
take something away.
GENE looks at his wife.
He puts his hand on PETER's back.
GENE CARNEY
Let's go son.... We're gonna go get
something to eat with Mr Charty.
The Three of them exit through the front door.
The screen slams.
MILDRED flicks her ash in the ash try, exhales a big puff
smoke and takes a sip of her drink.
INT. GENE'S CADILAC, FRONT OF CARNEY HOUSE - NIGHT
GENE Starts the car. Mr. Charty sits in front and Peter is
in the back seat.
PETER opens his door and quickly jumps out.
GENE CARNEY
Pete..?
PETER
Just a second dad... I forgot
something.
PETER runs across the front lawn and up the porch steps.
PETER STANDING IN FRONT MILDRED
The coffee table sits between Peter and his mother.
MILDRED CARNEY
What do you want?
PETER lifts his face and their eyes meet.
PETER
I wish you were dead.
PETER turns and walks out the front door. The screen door
slams.
CUT TO:
EXT. FRONT OF CARNEY FAMILY HOUSE - NIGHT
GENE, PETER and MR. CHARTY arrive, exit the Gene's Cadilac
and walk to their respective houses.
GENE and PETER walk up the front steps and onto the porch.
MR. CHARTY
Your a good boy Peter.
PETER
Good night Mr. Charty.
PETER and his father walk house.
INSIDE, LIVING ROOM
MILDRED is laying on the couch. A large bloody gash is on
her forehead. She is passed out. They wake her.
GENE CARNEY
Mildred, Mildred..... Your
bleeding.... What happened?
Mildred stirs, opens her eyes halfway.
MILDRED CARNEY (SLURING)
I think I... I Slipped... In the
kitchen.
MILDRED touches her forehead.
MILDRED CARNEY (CONT'D)
I think I hit my head.
CARNEY KITCHEN
GENE CARNEY walks into the kitchen and inspects the kitchen
table. Blood is on one corner of the table and the floor
below.
LIVING ROOM
PETER stares at his mother's forehead.
GENE enters living room.
GENE CARNEY
Get up...
Mildred does not respond.
GENE CARNEY (CONT'D)
I said get up... Get your things...
We're going to the hospital.
MILDRED CARNEY
No... I'm not going.... I am fine.
MILDRED opens her eyes for a moment and then closes them.
MILDRED CARNEY (CONT'D)
I am not going anywhere.
GENE CARNEY
You are not fine.
MILDRED CARNEY (SCREAMING)
I'm not going anywhere and that's
final!
CUT TO:
INT. PETER'S BEDROOM. MORNING
Peter's bedroom when he was 11 has a mother's influence. No
posters, and no animal trophies. A very clean plain room
with blue lined wall paper, empty top of dresser, night
stands and two twin beds.
PETER IN HIS BED
PETER opens his eyes and stares at the ceiling. He swings
the blankets off of him and stands, discovers his mother
sleeping in the twin bed next to his.
Mildred's head wound has a small bandage.
MILDRED'S FACE
Mildred is extremely pale with blue lips.
PETER touches her cheek with and immediately withdraws his
hand.
PETER'S TORSO
PETE (SCREAMS)
Dad... Daaad!
PETER breathes like he is having an asthma attack.
FADE TO BLACK:
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